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Discussion in 'Denied' started by 1vm, Nov 25, 2018.

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  1. 1vm

    1vm New Member

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    Minecraft Username - 1vm
    Timezone - MEZ

    Would you consider yourself experienced with WorldEdit? Why? - Ich kenne eigentlich alle befehle von world-edit das sind sehr viele aber die nütlichstens kenne ich

    Would you consider yourself experienced with VoxelSniper? Why? -Ich kenne mich nicht so gut mit Voxelsniper aus ich habe immer mit worldedit gearbeiten und habe auch mit worldedit das terrain gemacht und halt auch andere sachen

    How active would you be on Brawl's Build Team?

    I would actually have time for the server every day but sometimes I have something to celebrate, for example holidays or holidays

    Why do you want to join Brawl's Build Team? -

    since I have been playing on the server for a long time and want to support the server with my building arts

    What would you consider your greatest strength with building?

    I would say I know a lot about building houses and terraforming, I've already had a lot of experience,and trees

    What would you consider your greatest weakness with building?

    I can not build organics so well anyway, detail is not that easy for me but I can do it a bit


    List any previous experience you have with building -

    I have been building for a very long time already where I bought minecraft I was interested in building I never understood what some people have against building or just think it boring I have a lot of experience in the time, for example how to do proper terraforming right Terra coloring and eg the mistake all beginners make 90c cliffs terra and have learned how to build real trees eg not just such a lollipop tree I think I've made a lot of experience in the years and I think I'm already very good I'm looking forward to join your buildteam I'm not allowed to join type of so after a day in the buildteam wants but I'm really really very long on the server on the like like 2016 or end 2015 thank you for reading my application and I hope I'm accepted thank you :smile:

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  2. muslim_vin

    muslim_vin Well-Known Member

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    you're in the right direction but you really need to stop using world edit for terrain, or at least stop making it look like your terrain was made with world edit, and make your terrain look a lot more natural. your trees as well, i suggest looking at real life trees and trying to base them off of those, because really that's all you have to do if you want to make a good tree. speaking of trees

    THIS IS A PALM TREE
    upload_2018-11-25_13-44-40.png

    THIS IS NOT A PALM TREE
    upload_2018-11-25_13-44-54.png


    and as I was saying, I'm a person who generally does not like the use of trying to blend stained clay with grass because it looks so ****ing amateur and too green, so i suggest using 20% coarse dirt and 20% normal dirt with 60% grass, it gives a really nice realistic grass feel that isn't too green, then when you put the foliage grass, i think the id is 71:1 or something, ontop it makes it look a lot better. ok now that i'm done talking about HOW to fix your grass, i'm gonna talk to you about your structures

    your structures are fine in themselves, it's just you might wanna choose a different block for the roof and fix the walls up a little bit, but the shaping is generally ok. you want to put a lot of "detail" on your houses. that's like window sills, shutters, missing planks in wooden walls (put a stair in the wall to do that) and bushes and flowers and stuff like that.

    now for the fun part, your ship

    okay now i'm not gonna teach you how to make ships because that's another style of building in itself, so i'm just gonna give you some reference pics to go off of next time you go and try and build a ship
    upload_2018-11-25_13-49-49.png
    upload_2018-11-25_13-50-38.png

    OKAY NOW WE'RE DONE WITH THAT, MOVING ON TO TERRAFORMING

    I mentioned this briefly earlier in my rant/essay/howto-guide, but your terrain is very lack luster and it looks world editted to ****. it's hard to explain how to terraform in text, but I will try my best.

    Let's use this
    upload_2018-11-25_13-52-14.png

    Your terrain is verrryyy bland, and if you look at the top of the cliff, it's all flat and it all stays on the same level of land. you want to fix that. you want your terrain to not be so uniform, let it spread into different places and let it have different shapes to it. your cliff is just a straight cliff (don't respond and tell me "BUT IT'S SUPPOOOOOOSSSEEED TO BE LIKE THAT" well if it's supposed to be like that then you got some weird terrain bucko) anyway as I was saying, you might want to have a different outline of the cliff, that outline being the one you make when you first start building and plan your build with several outlines and yada yada yada. now that i've briefly talked about that, i want to talk about the detail you make on your terrain. those random patches of granite will not suffice as detailing. when you see real life cliffs, you'll find sediment lines and deformations and lots of different shades of grey in unique patterns. you won't find random weird patches of granite. (i know now is a good moment for you to respond with "BUT IT'S MINECRAFT" if i see that reply i'm just gonna completely give up on the hope of you ever getting builder, because any builder would know to make their build look realistic enough for it to look nice) anyway, if you look at my terrain, you can see how plainly detailed it is, and it still looks nice:


    upload_2018-11-25_13-59-44.png

    do you see that line of cyan clay? do things like that when you have flat cliffs, you can do multiple sections of sediment levels, you can include blocks like cyan clay, grey clay, diorite, a mixture of andesite, cobble, and stone, normal clay, and even all sided acacia wood.

    sometimes you don't even have to add sediment lines, you can just detail it with blocks in the same color palette as the stone you make the mountain/cliff in

    here's a custom mountain i made by hand where i only detailed with sections of cyan clay and cobblestone
    upload_2018-11-25_14-2-1.png

    and usually, you might want to add a lot of grass and dirt to the cliff to make it look more overgrown and taken over by nature



    anyway i'm done giving you tips on how to fix up your builds, now maybe go put some of what you learned into practice. i'm gonna have to give you a -1, but i believe you can probably change that in a couple months after practicing a lot more.
     

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  3. 1vm

    1vm New Member

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    In your picture with the ship you have 90c cliffs terra @muslim_vin

    and these are old

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    but thanks for the opinion
     
  4. muslim_vin

    muslim_vin Well-Known Member

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    whats that

    and what i said was fact
     
  5. 1vm

    1vm New Member

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    90 degrees cliff terra
     
  6. MerryCoolmas21

    MerryCoolmas21 Bans and Appeals Manager

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    Agreed with Vin. What he said is actually pretty good feedback, I'd strongly recommend listening to it all.
     
  7. Reduced4Lyfe

    Reduced4Lyfe Member

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    So this is my problem with your application... Your first pic seems really similar to another build application I've seen, so unless you have an alt or you can prove it's yours it seems kinda sketchy to me.
     
  8. Ice_Bear1

    Ice_Bear1 Well-Known Member

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    -1 Instant deny from Ice Bear. These builds look plagiarized especially the first one http://www.brawl.com/threads/73951/ even is this player is your alt it is still not allowed to post two applications in the same month. It also doesn't help that there are major drops in build quality which seems very suspicious. That brawl sign, in particular, looks like you just screenshotted something a builder did. Unless you prove otherwise it is a -1.
     
  9. 1vm

    1vm New Member

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    @Ice_Bear1
    In addition I can prove all builds except with the ship also times half-length I am this builder on the screen I am Asassins only my main is spellbound (wrongly) but that interests synonymous so no preference so first ask before such an unnecessary text thank you :smile:

    spellbound = Banned
     
  10. xxMineSheepxx

    Build Team Wiki Team

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    Please provide this proof.
     
  11. 1vm

    1vm New Member

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    @xxMineSheepxx I cant provide the china ilands because my main is Banned
     
  12. xxMineSheepxx

    Build Team Wiki Team

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    What's your main's IGN?
     
  13. iamdroone

    iamdroone Profile pic by @Hexivoid

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    Since I am not a builder myself or I have very little experience in using WE I am not going to give a vote for this. I would high advise listening to the feed back given by @muslim_vin as it is one of the best feedback replies I have ever seen for an application. He makes very outstanding points on building and I highly reccomend you follow his ideas and tips for building.
     
  14. muslim_vin

    muslim_vin Well-Known Member

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    this man gets it
     
  15. xxMineSheepxx

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    It has come to our attention that you are currently banned, and have a banned alt for hacks. Please ensure that when you apply, you have a relatively clean history, and have a lack of recent major offenses.

    Please also listen to @muslim_vin 's suggestions to improve on your builds further.

    Denied.
     
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